This is me stepping up the pressure...

This is me putting up the pressure cooker.
When is dinner ready?
If no dinner, how about the next chapter?

Grant, I'm sure you want to put out more content just as much as we want to read it 
We're just showing you that you have an audience 
thanks!!!!

Please?
Please??
Please???
PLEASE????
PLEASE?????

Please Grant. We need you. Its tzorech horabbim and should be doche your other commitments long enough to write us another chapter......

I'd like a new installment as much as the next guy, but I think you guys are being a bit too pushy. Grant has barely been on the forum in months (on other threads as well, not just the story) , I wouldn't be so sure that he's ready to dive straight back in. Also, despite the level of his writing, as far as I'm aware grant doesn't work for gye, so doesn't really have any obligation to post, I wouldn't underestimate the work he puts in to each part. 

Tl;dr 
Don't nag for the next installment

Lchaim Tovim wrote:


GENERAL GRANT, to paraphrase Lechaim’s line, here’s 3 things to think about...
#1 do you want to stop keeping us in suspense?
#2 WHY do you want to stop?
#3 (assuming you answered yes to #1 and found your why) What behaviors are causing you to fall off the gye Map?
#4 stop overthinking

I hope this is not offensive to some people, but this platform is all about honest anonymity - i feel like for me, a big part of wanting to hear the next part - is "to say the least - not leshaim shamayim" - meaning its a  daunting thought at times for a lot people at times like what if my wife...finds out or my wife is my biggest fan and i am ruining it by digging deeper... all that stuff intrigues us to want to hear tactics and ideas based on hearing the "other side of the story (from the ezras nashim)" Hopefully it scares the hell out of someone .But you see, my yetzer hara has
the shrewdness of  the fbi
the communist mentality of bernie sanders
relentless like nancy pelosi
radical like alex jones
the ego of donald trump
treats me like I am joey biden
You get my drift, so what he does is he puts a story that has nice and juicy kosher porn, and makes my mind wonder every time i have a couple seuda.... no need to go into detail But my desperation to hear the rest of story - is tainted
I would say its like 50/50 for me - and without taking in the wind factor of the amazing deceiving evil inclination

growup wrote on 09 Aug 2022 15:36:

Sorry to hear your reservations. 
I guess we’re a little different, cos I’m not tainted . I mean who doesn’t like a good story?

You’ll have to be relegated to good old Dov posts 

Cool video a real "eye" opener

If the story makes you have bad thoughts just don’t read it. I personally really enjoy this story and it has helped me out a ton. It’s not for everyone, as the disclaimer says, but for some people (like me) it is a good warning of just what can go wrong and how far a seemingly “innocent” tievah can go

For some people its a tregar for some people, but it's an eye opener to see how things are rowling.

Hey guys!

Thank you for your interest!

So let me explain. There are a few reasons why I have been procrastinating over the past year or so.

I've been super busy due to a big change in my life and really do not have alot of time, but there are other reasons as well.

As has just been mentioned, and has been discussed a few times in the past as well, the story has seemed to trigger quite a number of people. Although I have gone back to edit the more graphic parts, ultimately the entire flow has been exciting people the wrong way.This has been a tremendous point of concern for me. It is being counter productive to what we are attempting to achieve on this site. It has even led me to wanting (and may still) to delete the chapters already posted. I know the moderators have approved the story, but that doesn't fully remove my concern. I'm very scared of the responsibility I'm accepting upon myself.

I know that many of you feel the pros outweigh the cons, nevertheless I fear causing even a small portion of people to start dreaming about this story every couple meal...(I know many of us may already be, regardless of the story unfortunately lol)

Additionally, I'm trying to live my own story to a point where my writing can reflect true emotions and how I feel to complete the final portion. BH it's been mostly heading in the right direction.

I still plan on finishing one day, although the part that's already been posted is the most important and influential.

                                 Grant

Grant, it's great to have you back with or without finishing the story.

Am I the only one who is wondering what happened to the plan of the 5 guys in Berlin, or why the person is running away in Chapter 1??
I think the story drifted away from the main suspense...

Thanks