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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 13:03 #27919

the.guard Current streak: 745 days OFFLINE Moderator Posts: 6438 Karma: 138	Opinion's NEEDED QUICK PLEASE Which Ad do you think gets the message accross better? This one (from yesterday)? Or this one (that I changed/updated TODAY)?
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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 13:05 #27921

habib613	the caught in the web one it's really really good R' Guard
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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 13:09 #27923

imtrying25 Current streak: 16 days OFFLINE Platinum Boarder Posts: 3010 Karma: 2	Hey Rabbeinu your not into the Rav to Rabbi switch??
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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 13:51 #27934

the.guard Current streak: 745 days OFFLINE Moderator Posts: 6438 Karma: 138	Hey Rabbeinu your not into the Rav to Rabbi switch?? There's a deep secret to that... Luria seems to know
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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 15:30 #27955

kedusha Current streak: 717 days OFFLINE Administrator Posts: 3167 Karma: 46	I'm with the second one as well - it reaches out directly to those who need the help most, and who are most likely to respond. Regardless of which one you use, Jacob's testimonial should be edited to read as follows (to make it consistently past tense, instead of switching from past tense to present tense): " . . . and created GYE and all the supporting networks."
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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 16:39 #27983

letakain OFFLINE Platinum Boarder KOTNMW Posts: 5036 Karma: 64	caught in the web- much clearer! it's super!
	I am proud of myself today because of who I am becoming with progress, not perfection one day at a time I am a pickle, and I'll never be a cucumber again. and pickles are YUM! my thread: guardyoureyes.com/forum/6-Women-on-the-way-to-90-Days/248941-Letakains-internet-addiction-journal Last Edit: by Munckin_17.

Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 18:05 #27999

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All I'd add is in agreement with someone above who said it needs a catchphrase. For me, something that'll hit the conscience of anyone who is abusing he net is a good idea, perhaps like: "Tired of hiding your internet abuse?"...that one may be too raw...maybe, "Do you have web surfing secrets? Do you hide your web surfing from your family?", or, "Are you struggling with a big web surfing secret?"..i'm at a loss here.

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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 21:11 #28043

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Thanks Dov. Good idea. How about "Caught in the Web? Tired of living a double life?"

One professional wrote:

Nice ad.

The spooky writing in "surfing the web" is a little strange. Also, why four different fonts on the four different big word lines at top? Looks cheesy and harder to read and focus no? Can't you keep it all one font or maybe two?

The words on the left side are too small to read almost and it is explaining what u offer. They should be bigger if possible.

Perhaps instead of the Free anonymous Amazing" write "Free - Anonymous - Life Changing?

The pic of rav tewersky is in a kind of random weird place. I think would look better if that box with him woul dbe all the way on bottom ad the hand pic would be moved to the top so that the finger tips would be parallel to the top of the words "web"

I think the words "surfing the web" are better even though caught in the web is cuter pun... bec surfing the web people understand right away what u are talking about i.e. surfing the web... while caught in the web they owuld have to contuinue reading to have an idea what u mean by caught in the web... better to be really clear with the first line of an ad if possible. U can still keep the spider web for that line.

good stuff.

I guess I'll keep everyone's great advice in mind for next time. Can't please everyone, eh?

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Re: DOES ANYONE WANT TO SPONSOR THIS AD? 12 Nov 2009 21:14 #28044

kedusha Current streak: 717 days OFFLINE Administrator Posts: 3167 Karma: 46	But there's no time to implement these changes this time around, is there?
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